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©2009 *raybender
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***CGTALK Users: in case you like this image, would you mind rating for it over there ? heres the link: [link] ****

personal Work.. i found an old sketch of an Hangar Interior and tried to make something out of it.. Tell me your opinions..

i need to practice to paint more loose.. i am always ending up too detailed with my personal work and then it takes too long too finsih and i am loosing interest and then i am rushing to an end.. lol.. i think you can see that.. :-?

**** it would be very cool to get some comments on the other pictures in my gallery, too*** -> [link]
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Given 2009-05-08

Arrival by *raybender combines a good perspective and well chosen details. The contrastful colors and the clean brushwork make this painting extraordinary. (Suggested by =ZuluSplitter and Featured by ^taenaron)

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:faint: The detail on this is absolutely amazing.

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:iconraybender:
thank you.. i am not really happy with it, but thats seldom that i am happy with a painting

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:iconkouki1:
:wow: Amazing work!!!!!
:iconurbo:
it seems that the picture dilapidate into two parts - upper and lower are not actually related to each other.
each can be considered separately, not together.)
:icontimthecat:
First off this is a great piece, good composition, color, and execution. You where right in posting this on DA.

Now my question is are you rushing because you know you are getting close to being done. I know you talked about this in the comments, but you should ask yourself this. the question is is it taking too long or am I getting this close to right? In this case you seemed to have hit the mark.

My problem is the piece always looks better in my head than as a finished piece. I wonder if you have this problem as well?;)



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:icongotetsu005:
This looks like a cross between Blade Runner and Coruscant (sp?). I like the detail, but I do agree that the lower half seems kind of detached from the upper half. The white light seems to contrast with the rest of the lights.

Still, I love it. The contrast can also be seen as a good thing. :)

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i think its really because i get bored of the painting.. but it would be said to put it away (and probably dont touch it for a long time or ever) so i think.. ok lets finish this the fast way.. the funny thing is with commisioned work i never have this problem.. its only with personal work.. strange.

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:iconraybender:
yeah you are right.. thats because i had something different in mind when i started (some upper class and lower class thing of meaning).. but then i changed that.. and it still shows the inital idea..

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:iconurbo:
I think they still can be linked - at least with the help of lighting. top is the source of white light, it can give reflexes on subjects below

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