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an environment concept for an upcoming project of Blue Tree Whacking.

thanks to my client for allowing me to show it here immediatly after finishing it.
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:iconnillcor:
~NillCor Jul 18, 2011   Digital Artist
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:iconunsunned:
i do not like people here :/
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:iconkaranua:
=karanua May 7, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Scene from the end of "logan's run" perhaps?

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Madness takes its toll - Have Exact Change Please.
Funny about children. Beggars keep you awake when they're there, and when they're not you can't sleep.
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:iconamunpg:
this is great, fantastic concept and final product
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:iconknightgainax:
Wow. This is a great piece. I like the concept behind it --- by which I mean the concept that the title suggests in my head.

Reminds me a bit of Megazone 23. You ever see that?
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:iconavenegra9arte:
hey men thats realy cool i like it, and greetings from Colombia

Att: Darcia Ave negra 9° Arte
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:icondigital--angel:
~Digital--Angel May 8, 2009  Student Traditional Artist
I really like your landscapes, but I have to be honest -- your people could use some work. The details (clothing, skin tone) are great, but to me their poses seem stiff, awkward, and unnatural.

Here are a few links I thought you could possibly use as references. None are full body, but I thought it could at least get you started.

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Also, the water in the picture seems too calm for the surrounding environment (ie. no ripples from wind or rain), and I was confused by the random gray circle on the middle right.

I think my favorite details would be the rocks and mushrooms (?) in the foreground, and the strong red in the building on the right contrasting with the rest of the scene.

Anyway, now that I've written you a book... You can ignore my critique, but I hope there was something useful in there.

Keep working to improve, you've got an enviable talent.

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Wisdom is protection just as money is protection. But the advantage of knowledge is that wisdom preserves the lives of its possessors.
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:iconraybender:
hey.. thanks for the time you took for the critique.. i really appreciate that..
and i know that i am not good with people... thats the reason why i call myself an environment Concept Artist.. hehe :) but you are right i really have to work on poses and characters. :) thanks for the references.. since city kids was work for a client, i wont touch it to redo the people in it. but i will definetly practice figures.. :)

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:icondigital--angel:
~Digital--Angel May 8, 2009  Student Traditional Artist
I'm really just glad you got something out of it :) I know that, personally, I hate it when all the comments I get are "OMFG! That's AMAZING" etc.

PS. Feel free to tear any of my pieces apart, lol

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:iconskywyvern:
The landscape is done wonderfull but your characters in the painting don't suit very well I think :no:

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Perfect art excist, you must just think it ^^
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