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Submitted: October 8, 2009
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Devils Club v2by ~raybender

Digital Art / Drawings & Paintings / Illustrations / Conceptual

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ok i could work on this one forever, but i started it as a sketch so i keep it as it is at this level. no need to detail it.

wanna do more rough stuff like this in the future.

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Critique by ~Shadowwwolf Oct 8, 2009, 2:37:33 PM

A very impressive piece. But I'm used to no less than impressive from you. The angle is interesting, the mood is solid. The textures work really well, and the piece has a very rough look about it that I really apreciate. And I can see what you were going for. And it worked out perfectly, I'd say. It really captures that oldschool mob look. The abandoned alley, the trash on the ground, the style of the windows, the graffiti. The guy with a hat and a long coat. There's just one thing that bothers me, and that is the car. The car just looks unpolished compared to the rest. Though most the detail in the rest of the piece is texture, the car looks out of place, because it isn't textured. (Not that it should be, but it's too rough and painted to fit in.) I think you should work it out a bit more, just the care. Right now it's too rough, not crispy, not edgy enough. Not like the rest of the piece.
But again, this is overall a very impressive piece.

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~sting45 Oct 21, 2011

It's absolutely sensational!

~sting45 Oct 21, 2011

It is really, really AMAZING!

~SaraSchool Jul 18, 2011 Student Traditional Artist

Please do more "rough" stuff like this. It is AMAZING! There is quiiiiite a bit of detail, but I think the sketchiness of it works REALLY well. Sometimes work can get too polished; this is just right