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ostblock by raybender ostblock by raybender
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:iconfreedmo:
English is translate by www.google.de, you find it lower.

Hi,
bevor ich Anfange dies ist meine erste Kritik, weiter hin soll nicht auf meinen Schreibstil geachtet werden sondern auf das was ich schreibe(Wenn ich was verbessern soll so sagt bitte Bescheid.). Der Englischeteil wird von mir erstmal über www.google.de fast 1:1 übersetzt. Entschuldige mich dafür.

So nun Endlich zum dein Bilden raybender.
Dein Kommentar zum Bild sagt dieses mal nur "peng peng", also nehme ich mir das Recht heraus das Thema selber zu interpretieren. Also der erste Punkt Vision bekommt von mir 4 Sterne.
Wie komme ich auf 4 Sterne?
"Ostblock" ist der Titel deines Bildes der zum Themenbereich "Sci-Fi" eingereicht wurde. So mit nehme ich eine kleine Zukunftsversion war. Darauf deutet die Zerstörte Umgebung, sowie das recht futuristische Auto. so wie das Design das Mannes im Vordergrund. Man schaue sich sein Helm oder die Waffen an. Ich gebe zu man kann keinen 100% zu Realität herstellen wegen dem eindrucksvollen Zeichenstil. Ich nehme an das wir eine Art der Anarchie oder Polizeistaates haben in einem Land wie z.B. Polen, Russland, etc. Es gilt anscheinend eine harte Rechtsprechung, man kann nicht sagen ob ein Polizist ist oder eine Soldat. Aus diesen Punkte schließe ich auf eine gute Umsetzung des Themas.

Originalität des Bildes muss ich mit nur 3 Sternen bewerten, lass mich erklären.
Beispiele eines futuristischen Polizei-/Kontrollstaates ist durch das Spiel "Half-Life 2" entstanden und vielen Sci-Fi Serien. Bei deinem Bild kommt womöglich die Polizeigewalt in den Vordergrund. Die auch heute Politisch aktuell ist.

Technik: dein Bild ist dem Bereich "Digital Art" zugeordnet.
Somit ist eine tolle Mischung aus recht detailreichen Hintergrund Flächen, wie z.B. die Häuser, das Auto, der Schnee, der Frost, das Eis, etc. Dies ist aber auch bei so einem Bild zu erwarten. Gelungen ist der Verwischt-effekt der im Vordergrund stärke ist, was an ein traditionelles Bild erinnert. Die Gefällt mir so gibt es von mir 5 Sterne.

Nun die letzten 3,5 Sterne.
Kommen durch den Gedanke das es wirklich passieren kann.
Und weil es mich zum denke bringt, jedoch verliert man durch die Technik ein großen Anteil an Emotionen.

So nun sage ich noch kompakt was ich denke.
Eine tolles Bild "ostblock" von dir. Habe mir auch andre Bilder von dir gesehen und es passt in dein "Repertoire"(mir wählt gerade kein anderes Wort ein.). Technik und Thema überzeugen mich am meisten.

So, sollte ich das Bild nicht so interpretiert haben wie du es dir vorgestellt hast, so sage das bitte.

Nun kommt eine fast/komplett Übersetzung durch www.google.de

Hi,
not to before I start this is my first criticism, even more attention to be my writing style but to what I write (If I have to improve what they say know.). The tables Engl part of me is first translated www.google.de of almost 1:1. I apologize for that.

So now at last to your pictures Raybender.
Your comment about the picture says this time only "bang bang", so I'm taking out the right to interpret the topic itself. So the first point of my vision gets 4 stars.
How do I get to 4 stars?
"Eastern bloc" to the title of your picture is filed on the subject of "Sci-Fi". So with the future I will take a small version was. This is indicated by the Devastated Area, as well as the rather futuristic car. as the design of the man in the foreground. Just look at his helmet or weapons. I admit you can not 100% with reality because of the impressive style of drawing. I suppose we have a kind of anarchy or a police state in a country such as Poland, Russia, etc. It apparently is a hard case, one can not say if a policeman or a soldier. On those points I agree with a good implementation of the subject.

originality of the picture, I must assess with only 3 stars, let me explain.
Examples of a futuristic police state / state controlcreated by the game "Half-Life 2" and many sci-fi series. If your picture is perhaps the police force in the foreground. The current policy is today.

Technology: your picture is the area of "Digital Art" category.
Thus, a great mix of very detailed background areas, such as the houses, cars, snow, frost, ice, etc. This is but even with such a picture to be expected. Successful is the blurred effect of the foreground intensity is reminiscent of a traditional image. The Like there is of me 5 stars.

Now the last 3.5 stars.
Come by the idea that it really can happen.
And because it brings me to think, but you lose the art, a large share of emotions.

So now I say what I think is still compact.
A great image "eastern bloc" of you. I've seen other pictures of you and it fits in your "repertoire" (I do not just choose a different word.). Technology and theme convince me the most.

So, I should not have interpreted the image as you have presented to you, so please say this.
What do you think?
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eppersonator Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2012
This would be a great cover for my graphic novel!
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MreoAdopts Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Why don't you commission him, maybe even get something more precise to your novel :)
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Asparuh13 Featured By Owner May 21, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
amazing skills!
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dcr3773 Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2011
I love the feeling it gives..It almost feels like a cold winter morning.
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TheSUNGlassKid Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
"Sir, you can't park here."
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NullBoss Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
NICE!
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QAuZ Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2010
This has been featured [link]
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MasPix Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2010  Professional Photographer
really gritty cool artwork
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battlereaper Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2010  Student Digital Artist
Very cool looking.
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trub Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2010
Really nice peice overall i think.
But noticable is that the car is alot more detailed than the character or even both who are closer.

The snow is awsome really, you can feel the cold wind.
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Knockwurst Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2010
love it, so simple and effective, you probably took 4-6 hours on this huh?
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:iconraybender:
raybender Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2010
5 hours
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Knockwurst Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2010
thought so, very impressive, but hey that's why your professional!
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Antaria-Nova Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2010
Really nice designs.
I like that helmet, and the gun.
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Fav'd! :D
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:iconredfred77:
Redfred77 Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2010
Wow bro..i must say that alot of your work is my main main inspiration for wanting to go this route..just awsome..and in 5 hours..hectic bro.
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XtraxX Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2010
schaut super aus :D peng peng beschreibts recht gut hehe
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karsten Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2010  Professional Interface Designer
Ah thats why I had you on my watch list :P
Cooooooooooooooooool!
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StreaksPsyche Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2010
Lovely work sir.
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ctrl-4lt-d3l Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Awesome!
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:iconniekitty:
niekitty Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2010
one more round. just to be sure.
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Crispinius Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2010
Another great job!
Left figure just needs a bit more work, his legs and arms seem to be out of proportion
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SchneeKatze09 Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow that is awesome! :D
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Soul-Daemon Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
I love the orange tint on the edge of the shadows on the buildings in the background, its an optical effect that's got a proper name but I cant remember it...:shrug:
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raybender Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2010
when you remember, please tell me.. i can´r remember either how this is called
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Hart-Worx Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2010  Professional Photographer
ich liebe deine Arbeiten!
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:iconraybender:
raybender Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2010
danke
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:iconhart-worx:
Hart-Worx Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2010  Professional Photographer
nichts zu danken ... hätte gerne deine skills...
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:iconraybender:
raybender Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2010
ja siehst du und ich würde gerne so cool fotografieren können wie du :)
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Hart-Worx Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2010  Professional Photographer
ich hab dich mal bei facebook geaddet :D
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raybender Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2010
oh. ich benutz facebook nicht mehr.. um genau zu sein wollt ich das schon lange mal stillegen.. also nich wundern wenn ich da bald nich mehr bin
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Hart-Worx Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2010  Professional Photographer
argh .. hast du skype oder so? :D
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raybender Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2010
raybender
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DanLuVisiArt Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
Love it!
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raybender Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2010
thanks Dan! hows your project coming along ?
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DanLuVisiArt Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
Good! We just turned in the story to Paramount, so now they'll begin looking for writers..and then I can create the art team..

Hope you're going to be free in the next year ;)
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raybender Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2010
haha :) count me in!
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silvercherriz Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Very nice! I like the snow-ish graininess. Very cool.
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888erkan888 Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
is this from a game? if not it should be a game lol
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raybender Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2010
no this is from my violent mind.. hehe ... hmm that would make a good game title, hm ? VIOLENT MIND
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888erkan888 Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
you say you have a violent mind...me too! =)

(and i still want you to paint michael jackson robbing a bank!)
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raybender Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2010
haha... dont think this is going o happen.. :)
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888erkan888 Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
atleast i tried! but work on with these scifi themes...love them.
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:iconraybender:
raybender Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2010
:)
another Sci Fi Painting comes today
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Fresh-H Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2010
f...ing awesome! Keep rocking mr Raybender! :)
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FisHPastE89 Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2010  Professional Interface Designer
nice painting, that dude looks hardcore! n i like the brick texture you achieved . good job
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Rotaken Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2010
car desing is cool
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Nirdian Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2010  Hobbyist
Damn. This is quite awesome. It's got great lighting and shadowing that really set an eerie and silent mood and the character's poses are very realistic and emotion-conveying. Great roughed up buildings and tech-design too.
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Kunouichivamp Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
How do you buildings so well?! I suck at them D:
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ErranEntertainment Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2010
Front wheels on the vehicle seem way too far forward and the damage to the buldings seems bizarrely two dimensional, like it has been pasted onto the facade. Upper limbs on the character also seem too short. No doubt I will cop flack for this statement, but this is not your best work
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raybender Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2010
yeah you are right..thats all i can do in 5 hours
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